Writing narrative description or plot summary instead of practical application of drama skills
“Candidates should ensure that they focus their discussion primarily on the practical application of drama skills. Many marks are lost where candidates indulge in narrative description or character analysis.”— 0411 Paper 1, May/June 2025
How to fix: Every paragraph must answer the question 'what would the actor/director/designer DO on stage, and why?' Replace plot summary with concrete practical instructions: a vocal direction (volume, pace, pitch, pause), a physical direction (gesture, posture, proxemics, eye focus), a design choice (a specific colour, fabric, prop, lighting state) or a directorial choice (entrance, blocking, focus). Anchor every choice to a specific line or stage direction in the extract and state the dramatic effect on the audience. If a sentence retells what happens in the play, delete it.