Evaluation is just a summary or repetition of earlier points — no justified decision
“Evaluation must include a justified decision that follows on from the points raised in the answer. A repetition of points already explained in the answer will not gain evaluation marks.”— 7115 Paper 1, May/June 2023
How to fix: Evaluation must contain three elements: (1) a clear decision or recommendation, (2) a reason why this choice is best, and (3) why the alternative is weaker. Never repeat points already made — add a NEW reason or weigh up the relative importance of your earlier arguments. One approach: make a choice, give a reason, then explain why it is better than the alternative discussed.