Not developing answers beyond the initial point — stating a factor without explaining its consequence
“While they correctly identified a relevant factor, they did not develop their answer and therefore didn't gain additional marks.”— 2281 Paper 21, May/June 2023
How to fix: After every point you make, add a 'so' or 'this means that' sentence. For example: 'Storage of coal is difficult (point) → so supply cannot easily be increased in the short term → this makes PES inelastic (development).' Each point needs at least one development sentence to earn the second mark.