These Higher Religious, Moral and Philosophical Studies topics consistently produce the lowest scores. Prioritise these in your revision.
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Essay analysis vs description — failing to move from KU into genuine analysis
All three Course Reports identify the inability to convert knowledge into analysis as the defining weakness separating C-grade from A-grade candidates. Markers note that candidates write extensive KU but fail to add the 'so what' — the analytical link that explains purpose, implication, or significance.
Affects: Question Paper 1, Question Paper 2, Assignment
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Sustained line of evaluative argument throughout a 20-mark essay
In 2023 and 2025, markers noted that candidates frequently evaluated the moral issue itself rather than evaluating the religious or non-religious response to it. Evaluation marks are only awarded for judging the religious/non-religious response relative to the question, not for discussing whether a moral issue is good or bad.
Affects: Question Paper 1, Question Paper 2
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Non-religious ethical frameworks — Humanism and Utilitarianism beyond surface phrases
In 2023, non-religious responses consistently underperformed religious responses. In 2024, markers flagged that candidates applied the same surface-level Utilitarian phrase across all moral issues rather than engaging with its distinct components (Consequentialism, Act vs Rule Utilitarianism, Utility Calculation).
Affects: Question Paper 1
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Identifying and naming the specific moral issue contained in the question
In 2024 and 2025, a recurring pattern was candidates failing to explicitly identify and signpost the specific moral issue named in the question before engaging with religious or non-religious responses. Without this step, essays lack focus and markers cannot award analysis marks cleanly.
Affects: Question Paper 1
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Primary text and specific doctrinal engagement in World Religion essays
In 2023, candidates studying Christianity were unaware of the term 'Eucharist'. In 2024, many candidates were unfamiliar with the concept of the Sangha in Buddhism. These gaps in specific doctrinal knowledge directly block access to the KU marks that underpin the analytical paragraphs.
Affects: Question Paper 1
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Origins section — over-complex presentation of Big Bang, Evolution, Teleological and Cosmological Arguments
In 2024, markers noted that some centres taught the Big Bang Theory, Theory of Evolution, Teleological Argument, and Cosmological Argument in a complex and extended manner, impeding candidates' ability to earn KU marks. In 2025, candidates in the Origins section consistently struggled to balance content with analysis.
Affects: Question Paper 2
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Evaluation paragraphs in the assignment — distinguishing analysis from evaluation
In both 2024 and 2025, assignment markers found that candidates demonstrated stronger KU than A and E skills. Many candidates analysed their sources but stopped short of passing judgement on the source's validity, strength, or limitations in relation to their question — the step that earns evaluation marks.
Affects: Assignment
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Distinguishing between adjacent course specification bullet points (e.g. purposes of punishment vs responses to crime)
In 2025, many candidates answering the 20-mark Justice question on 'responses to crime' wrote instead about 'purposes of punishment'. In 2024, candidates confused Christian Action and Christian Community. These errors indicate that course content is being taught thematically rather than mapped precisely to each bullet point in the specification.
Affects: Question Paper 1, Question Paper 2