Writing common-sense answers instead of using sociological concepts and theories
“Some candidates could only score lower marks as their answers tended to be based on common sense rather than Sociology.”— 2251 Paper 2, May/June 2023
How to fix: Every paragraph in (c), (d), and (e) answers must contain at least one sociological term, concept, theory, or study. Replace vague phrases like 'people are treated differently' with specific concepts like 'labelling theory,' 'patriarchy,' 'cultural deprivation,' or 'institutional racism.' Name at least one sociologist or study per extended answer (e.g. Oakley, Becker, Cohen).