Writing in bullet points instead of continuous prose for Section B 'explain' and 'discuss' questions
“It is expected that candidates write their answers in continuous prose for Section B questions, as stated in the specification. Those writing bullet points often could not be credited as the bullet points were not linked and consisted of a list of terms and short statements in a random and unclear sequence. This was particularly the case for 'explain' and 'discuss' questions, where the linking is essential for candidates to demonstrate they have a depth of understanding.”— 9693 Paper 1, May/June 2025
How to fix: Use one- or two-word bullet points in the margin as scaffolding ONLY, then write the actual answer in linked sentences. Each sentence must connect to the next using cause-and-effect words: 'because', 'so', 'this means', 'as a result'. Bullets in the answer space lose marks even if the content is correct.